I lost my candle

Chacun de nous garde des choses qui sont précieuses pour lui ....et quand elles sont menacées il essaye de les protéger ....mais est ce qu'il a tjrs le pouvoir de les garder....?????

pour moi ,g perdu une chose que j' ai vu tjrs comme une bougie c pour ça ,le titre du poem """ I lost my candle """


voici mon poem :

I lightened a candle
I was waiting for a soul
so many problems to handle
there was no law
there was no rule

I was scared nof wind
cause my candle was alone
I wish a I had a friend
there were nothing
No meat ,No fat but bone

So I had to become a knight
But I was weak with no sword
I tried to protect my light
It was strong ,Ii was the lord

I gave up
regret fills me
I guess
I was silly

as usual ,no comment ,it's me the first to comment............where r u : narcisse ,unknown (for me known ) ,luckystar ,angel girel ,princesse ,nana ,mimo87 ???????????????????????????????????? where r uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ,......................

slm

déjà g vu le poéme hier mé g t hor ligne

i liked it

gd luk

salam

How did you lose your candle I don't inderstand

ps: don't be silly, and gave up don't

MDN481 je m excuse pour cette longue absence
pour tt dire tes poemes sont si waaw que par fois on se dit just no comment
bravo encore 1000000000 fois
you are a talented personne .

thank u so much my friends ...angel girl

kikilove : sometimes we need to empty or hearts ,and the poem may talk about passt ,present or futur ....the poem is not mine ,but it's yours tooooooo ,anyone can take it and make it its own story ...us humans ,we share a lot of feelings ,a lot of dreams ,a lots of goals ,so we share a life and when someoen talk about itself ,it talks about us too ,.....

lol ,surment il y aura un manque d'inspiration unknown ,le tx du B D Glucopyranose est trop bas lolllllllllllllllllllllll pour faire bouger tes nerfs et centres nerveux lolllllllll.....en ts just 1 mot de ta part me rend content t'nquiete ami

so nice ,),)
specially

Citation :

I tried to protect my light
It was strong ,Ii was the lord

tnx nana !!!

MDN your poems are awesome , very nice , Bravo my Bro

MDN481 a écrit:

.....en ts just 1 mot de ta part me rend content t'nquiete ami

Merci bro , ça fait plaisir