SWEET POISON / Intoxicated

Sujet: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 03/03/10, 07:53 pm

you played like a vampire
with no mercy in your heart
gruesomely you put me on fire
you stole my precious moonlight
when I was blown in my desire

the poison was so sweet to try
incredibly addicted to every shot
why didn't you let me die ?
you stole all what I have got
when I made you my only standby

Here I am telling the lesson
cause I learned mine
never put your trust in person
don't look for the sweet wine
till you see the sweet vine

mdn481 ,wednesday ,03 march 2010 at 19.54

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 03/03/10, 08:21 pm

What a sweet poem! You're a talented poet!

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 04/03/10, 09:09 pm

joy a écrit:: What a sweet poem! You're a talented poet!

tnx so much joy SWEET POISON / Intoxicated Icon_redface

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 04/03/10, 09:48 pm

malgré que chui pa fan d'englais mais sincerement tes poemes sont waaaaaaaaw SWEET POISON / Intoxicated Drunken_smilie

bonne continuation a toi SWEET POISON / Intoxicated Icon_wink

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 06/03/10, 11:09 am

hiba a écrit:: malgré que chui pa fan d'englais mais sincerement tes poemes sont waaaaaaaaw

bonne continuation a toi

oh merciiiiii bcp HIBA ,c trés gentil de part ...merci SWEET POISON / Intoxicated Icon_redface

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 06/03/10, 01:13 pm

it seems very beautiful!à chaque fois ke je lis tes poémes je me sens touchée au coeur,tu arrive vraiment à cibler le but(Roben des bois!)
thx very much,j'ai le plaisir de lire tes poémes....

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 06/03/10, 01:40 pm

did you know that you're toxic SWEET POISON / Intoxicated Icon_cheers

it's nice

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 24/04/10, 10:15 pm

andromede a écrit:: it seems very beautiful!à chaque fois ke je lis tes poémes je me sens touchée au coeur,tu arrive vraiment à cibler le but(Roben des bois!)
thx very much,j'ai le plaisir de lire tes poémes....

tnx so much ,bezef 3lia lol merci Andromede SWEET POISON / Intoxicated Icon_redface

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 26/05/10, 05:01 pm

héhé you seem touched by our forum of pharmacists ,, here poison ,, the other poem infectious next time talk about some medicines because in our time we become "medicines' dependent"

i'm just joking ,, very nice dude and nice to see you around again

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 26/05/10, 08:54 pm

Biba a écrit:: héhé you seem touched by our forum of pharmacists ,, here poison ,, the other poem infectious next time talk about some medicines because in our time we become "medicines' dependent"

i'm just joking ,, very nice dude and nice to see you around again

Tnx BIBA ..where were u !!! It's so refreshin' 2 see u again hanging up on my poems lol ..tnx so much

Invité

I read another lovely piece
I think ,I got back my inspiration to comment on poems
I hope to write also is coming soon

well, you touched me with your ideas and much with your words

you stole all what I have got
when I made you my only standby

I think that she doesn't steal your passion for peotry SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 894822

and I agree with Andromede
I think we should call you Robin of the woods

Sujet: Re: SWEET POISON / Intoxicated 15/06/10, 08:10 pm

Jane a écrit:: I read another lovely piece
I think ,I got back my inspiration to comment on poems
I hope to write also is coming soon

well, you touched me with your ideas and much with your words

you stole all what I have got
when I made you my only standby

I think that she doesn't steal your passion for peotry

and I agree with Andromede
I think we should call you Robin of the woods

waw tnx so much jane 4 this review ...I'm really happy to read ur comments again ...
I would not say no for Robin of the wood ,this is a big big honor 4 me