YOU REMIND ME

You remind me of a name
I am trying to forget yet it is engraved
In my memory and my daily life

I am thinking of statutes that were built
To remind me of heroes and champs
You too want to leave a print in history
one question is haunting you..
Will the whole universe remember me?

Living as a shadow roaming on here and there
Looking for the truth and a warm nest
A funny outside making all the humans laugh but me
A prisoner of a sadness that I refuse to confess even to my own self
I am just like this candle that burns itself to enlighten gloom of you all

You remind me of a wise man sitting all alone
Telling so a difficult riddles
only smartest ones are able to find the solution
yet it is still a muse
Maybe you are a main character of an ancient book
You read one day when you were too little
That’s your secret and words are bringing you back
as if You are among my universe again
you remind me of all that is beautiful and sincere

Spoiler:

written by la personne la plus chère à mon coeur

this peace of a free poetry REMIND ME of myself .really it does ,this is like a going-back trip ...back to basics ...love it ...especially that I am not writing these days

but if the writer take care of the shape ...some verses are way too long ,he/she can make them shorter or just cut down into 02 verses ,this would be better for the whole poem ,ans for the writer to get the sensation correctly ....

Anyway ,I think it's written in faithful way ,this is the most important ...I alaways love to say """"" the art is created to recognize the artist """"

Thank you for sharing .....

ce titre me rappelle une chanson de Nickelback : how you remind me

very nice

the main thing i felt : sincerity !!! dunno how
second thing i felt : a trip back 4000 Bc !
the third thing i felt : remembers me of myself too
thnx a lot for sharing

MDN481 a écrit:

this peace of a free poetry REMIND ME of myself .really it does ,this is like a going-back trip ...back to basics ...love it ...especially that I am not writing these days

but if the writer take care of the shape ...some verses are way too long ,he/she can make them shorter or just cut down into 02 verses ,this would be better for the whole poem ,ans for the writer to get the sensation correctly ....

Anyway ,I think it's written in faithful way ,this is the most important ...I alaways love to say """"" the art is created to recognize the artist """"

Thank you for sharing .....

thanks for the comment MDN every time on time
I shall pass on these remarks to the writer

narcisse a écrit:

MDN481 a écrit:

this peace of a free poetry REMIND ME of myself .really it does ,this is like a going-back trip ...back to basics ...love it ...especially that I am not writing these days

but if the writer take care of the shape ...some verses are way too long ,he/she can make them shorter or just cut down into 02 verses ,this would be better for the whole poem ,ans for the writer to get the sensation correctly ....

Anyway ,I think it's written in faithful way ,this is the most important ...I alaways love to say """"" the art is created to recognize the artist """"

Thank you for sharing .....

thanks for the comment MDN every time on time
I shall pass on these remarks to the writer

Oh don't mention it Narci ....it's a just a small highlight on a poem of someone we respect both of us very much ...