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| Sujet: THIS IS OUR FATE"  15/07/09, 12:07 pm | |
| Hey guys!
cause it's special for "sensitive poemes"
I wanna to share with you one of my poemes "THIS IS OUR FATE" special for a walk to remember
I was lost when you took me away
I was hating my life when you told me there is a way
I was hopeless when you said let’s play
We start the game
and I didn’t know that I was your aim
You became a part of me
without knowing that I was the miracle that you wished to see
I drew our future, I began to fly,
and suddenly you said”I’m going to die”
Why don’t you tell me before
Maybe, I could have the chance to be next you more
Why don’t you tell me before
May I tried to stop this love
I wished, it was me
I wished that we could change our destiny
But it was late
Because you left me saying “this is our fate”.........................
Hope you like it!!!!
waiting for your comments
Dernière édition par Jane le 05/03/10, 04:46 pm, édité 1 fois |
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| | Sujet: Re: THIS IS OUR FATE" 31/07/09, 01:59 pm | |
| is that you ? oh my Godddd ! it's so nice so beautiful ! yes sometimes life is infair (i think that every time) when we find love finally, something wrong happen and stop us suddenly from dreaming, i don't know it's not just die who makes things work badly but also ... it's just infair ! 
Dernière édition par nana le 31/07/09, 02:00 pm, édité 1 fois (Raison : forgot some words) |
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hichamino
Sergent
 Nombre de messages : 1281
Age : 34
Localisation : entre les lignes
Emploi/loisirs : lire entre les lignes
Niveau : attention 4 eme , je suis la
Date d'inscription : 06/03/2009
| | Sujet: Re: THIS IS OUR FATE" 31/07/09, 02:15 pm | |
| Bravooo Jane ;à ++ nchallah | |
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| | Sujet: Re: THIS IS OUR FATE" 03/08/09, 03:50 pm | |
| thnx  |
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narcisse
Capitaine
 Nombre de messages : 2083
Localisation : bin l'buro wa rgaaad
Emploi/loisirs : plantes médicinales
Niveau : mes cher amis vous me manquez tous
Date d'inscription : 17/08/2008
| | Sujet: Re: THIS IS OUR FATE" 05/03/10, 06:11 pm | |
| yes it's so beautiful,
meaningful words but so sad | |
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joy
Eplucheur de patate
Nombre de messages : 46
Age : 37
Date d'inscription : 08/01/2010
| | Sujet: Re: THIS IS OUR FATE" 05/03/10, 06:19 pm | |
| Hi Jane,
As you said, it's a nice coincidence!
Your poem is a beautiful summary of one of my favourite movies.
"I wished, it was me
I wished that we could change our destiny "
Unfortunately, we can't do anything againt destiny, we have to accept it and life goes on... | |
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MDN481
Soldat
Nombre de messages : 296
Age : 36
Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba
Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ...
Niveau : Pharmacien
Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| | Sujet: Re: THIS IS OUR FATE" 06/03/10, 11:58 am | |
|  hii again my friend ...I like ur poem ...you have such a good instant in poetry .. because I like you as a poet ,and I'm a real amateur ,""" plz Jane ,write ur verses shroter ,cause long verses are weak "" and when u write short verses it goes amazing I swear u're talented ,get short verses plz then u'll have jewels on ur paper ....with all love and respect | |
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andromede
Garde champêtre
Nombre de messages : 248
Age : 35
Localisation : le ciel spacieux
Emploi/loisirs : tker3ij nyahaha!
Niveau : 5eme et bye bye!
Date d'inscription : 07/02/2010
| | Sujet: Re: THIS IS OUR FATE" 06/03/10, 01:09 pm | |
| I drew our future, I began to fly,
and suddenly you said”I’m going to die”
c'est trés expressif,t'as 1 style ki est trés jolie.....
merci,c'est 1 plaisir de lire des mots signifiants comme ça,c'est vraiment beau! | |
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