Born to live without love !!! Narcisse ,unknown ,luckystar ,angel girl ...this is for u guys

I like this poem very much
*but just wondering , why did you use this metaphore??

I'm like a church without a bell

it's away to think abt at
don't you think so

I did use this metaphore because of 03 things :

--- I'm muslim ,proud of that too ,but sometimes to bring the right sense u're obliged to be inspired by other cultures ,other religions ...etc ,it has no relation with my faith

---Sometimes as a poet or even as an Amateur (my case) ,u can have 02 phrases to say and holdin' the same meaning but one is more powerful than the other ,or maybe more touching ...so use it ,poetry allow u don't worry about that .

--- As a poet ,u hold a message ,a noble one ,u have to rise my friend ...No racisme ...


Poetry or any art in the world has no senses ,it's the artist who gives Art this senses ....u understand me JANE ..I hope lol

Hey jane !!!

I said : I Am Like a church without a bell

you described it as a metaphore ,it seems like a metaphore !! but it's a comparaison more than a metaphore cause I kept """ Like """" ,...it can be a metaphore if I said "" I'm a church without a bell "" .....you see the difference jane ???

when I was writing ,this phrase came to me ,I forgot about its source ...but i did use it cause it describs the situation very well which is the fact that i'm not like human being anymore without love so it is a church without a bell or a mosque without Adane to call to prayer then church and mosques will be empty ....


I wish you'll understand this time

MDN481 a écrit:

Hey jane !!!

I said : I Am Like a church without a bell

you described it as a metaphore ,it seems like a metaphore !! but it's a comparaison more than a metaphore cause I kept """ Like """" ,...it can be a metaphore if I said "" I'm a church without a bell "" .....you see the difference jane ???

when I was writing ,this phrase came to me ,I forgot about its source ...but i did use it cause it describs the situation very well which is the fact that i'm not like human being anymore without love so it is a church without a bell or a mosque without Adane to call to prayer then church and mosques will be empty ....


I wish you'll understand this time

firstly, I like the way you express and you explain your poem
it's really rich conversation !!!!!
get it now!!