Across the sky

Sujet: Across the sky 25/02/10, 12:27 pm

Tjrs j'ai voulu savoir comment on va sentir lorsque nos esprit quitte la terre !!!! voilà ma propore imagination ....hope u like it

Across the sky !

I opened my eyes to see
surprise ,everything's blue
I wondered how it could be !
Help! ,is it a dream ,is it true ?

I needed a real explaination
but there were no real option
Like a stranger living in a fiction
that time a I felt the deception
Runing in every possible direction
first time to feel that attraction

all I could do is to fly
Everything in me is getting high
more than a bird or a butterfly
flying across the sky

écrit par mdn481 ,à 12:25 ,jeudi/25/02/2010

Sujet: Re: Across the sky 25/02/10, 05:07 pm

Welcome back MDN i like it so much ,, as usual very nice poem

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Oh My god!!!!!
it's really something wonderful!!!
your words are really well written
just say, i've so much time i didn't read a poem as this one!!

Everything in me is getting high
more than a bird or a butterfly
flying across the sky

best part!!

i'm wondering, there's a mate in poetry for me in Annaba and i don't know!!!

Sujet: Re: Across the sky 25/02/10, 05:52 pm

magnifque

super beau Across the sky 103908

impresionnat Across the sky 103908

chapeau bas pour toi MDN481

PS: j'adore tes poemes Across the sky Herz

Sujet: Re: Across the sky 26/02/10, 12:08 pm

I'm so glad to recieve such comments !!! je vous remercie tous pour l'encouragement ......je vs adores