I need an INTERVENTION

Sujet: I need an INTERVENTION 26/02/10, 04:30 pm

Titre : I need an intervention

I'm tired of being alone
my body is sick of waiting
will love live here anymore ?

Day by day I'm burning
The picture is becomin' smaller
Will I hold the pain ???

Everytime I take a hike
Life gives me a strike
will this make me insane ???

I really need an intervention
so that I can save my life
All I get is the rejection
will my heart feel safe ??

Everytime I saw a hope
I found that it was a joke
will I believe anymore ???
will I repair what I broke ???

Sujet: Re: I need an INTERVENTION 26/02/10, 05:02 pm

bravo t'es talentueux , c'est touchant

mais si ça décrit ton état I need an INTERVENTION Kopfschuettel

c malheureux bah je te souhaite que du bien Nchallah

Sujet: Re: I need an INTERVENTION 26/02/10, 05:05 pm

i'm here to fill in your loneliness
don't ever feel the weakness
be strong and have faith in your brightness
keep on shining never be lightless
cause everyone around you we'll be without you as a homeless

By Biba as a response to MDN's poem

Sujet: Re: I need an INTERVENTION 26/02/10, 05:16 pm

thank you so much
BIBA that's too much for me

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Everytime I saw a hope
I found that it was a joke
will I believe anymore ???
will I repair what I broke ???

Everytime, I meet good ones
I start to say
if i'm feeling the same way
will i be able to trust
will i be able to forget the past

by jane

Sujet: Re: I need an INTERVENTION 26/02/10, 08:44 pm

Waw I found that collaboration great JANE ...come on let's get together and do something for poetry here ...we can do it ,!!! I need an INTERVENTION 103908

....I'm really happy to find you here and u're talented girl I need an INTERVENTION 145753

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MDN481 a écrit:: Waw I found that collaboration great JANE ...come on let's get together and do something for poetry here ...we can do it ,!!! ....I'm really happy to find you here and u're talented girl

me too, I see the same thing!!
in every time i read your verses
it's kinda i wanna say more verses
I lost inspiration few amonths ago
and here i'm saying poetry again
you woke me up!!
thank you

Sujet: Re: I need an INTERVENTION 27/02/10, 12:44 pm

never mind girl u're welcom ....me too i suffer from the same thing ,loosing inspiration is not a lasting probleme ,it comes and goes ...finally we are in again lol

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Rakou tspikiw kliziya I need an INTERVENTION Icon_biggrin

merci de partager MDN I need an INTERVENTION Icon_razz

mais fo po se sentir lonely I need an INTERVENTION Icon_razz

mlaha la loneliness, ça te laisse le temps de devenir créatif... lol I need an INTERVENTION Icon_tongue

Sujet: Re: I need an INTERVENTION 27/02/10, 06:32 pm

yeah c vrai billie andak hak koun majatch la solitude koun rani sans inspiration lol

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oui! les plus belles choses sont créées dans des moments de solitude!

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