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Nombre de messages : 296 Age : 36 Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ... Niveau : Pharmacien Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| Sujet: MY HEART IS NOT FOR SALE 20/03/10, 12:23 pm | |
| Holding my heart in my hands And bleeding tears God what I'm going to do First I bought love Now I'm buying fears Listen !I'm not afraid I'm not afraid to chose I'm telling all the world my heart is not for sale it's My blood or my word Go you are free let me breake the ice and take your dirty money I'm ready to sacrifice what ever it will be
written by mdn481 on saturday 21st march 2010 at 12.15 | |
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| Sujet: Re: MY HEART IS NOT FOR SALE 20/03/10, 01:34 pm | |
| well, let's talk about the title first I Really like it It pushed me to open the topic and before looking to the autor I was sure that it was for you
The poem is well organized especially the rhyms but the ideas are bit misunderstandable
cause, if we talk about feelings you said your heart is not for sale but in the begining, you said i bought a love do you think that we should use this descption for heart or love do you think that love or heart are avalaible for buying and sale?? |
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MDN481 Soldat
Nombre de messages : 296 Age : 36 Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ... Niveau : Pharmacien Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| Sujet: Re: MY HEART IS NOT FOR SALE 20/03/10, 05:23 pm | |
| - Jane a écrit:
- well, let's talk about the title first
I Really like it It pushed me to open the topic and before looking to the autor I was sure that it was for you
The poem is well organized especially the rhyms but the ideas are bit misunderstandable
cause, if we talk about feelings you said your heart is not for sale but in the begining, you said i bought a love do you think that we should use this descption for heart or love do you think that love or heart are avalaible for buying and sale?? i thank so much jane for that review...I love that Explaination : You should read the description of the poem ""hommage à la dignité humaine"" or in english "" A tribute to the humain dignity"" ,et bein oui JANE hearts are for sale now ,i mean by heart : feelings not as an organ lol ,people are buying others heart with money or something else....I wanted to send a message through this poem for whom love costs a price ,for material people...this my message I hope u understand me ...If poet give the message so clear there will be no weight for the poem ,sometimes poet must give it between lines to push people to learn the lesson ,to attract their attention I'm sur you understand me here I thank you so much again ,keep on shining on my poems JANE | |
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| Sujet: Re: MY HEART IS NOT FOR SALE 20/03/10, 05:29 pm | |
| - MDN481 a écrit:
- Jane a écrit:
- well, let's talk about the title first
I Really like it It pushed me to open the topic and before looking to the autor I was sure that it was for you
The poem is well organized especially the rhyms but the ideas are bit misunderstandable
cause, if we talk about feelings you said your heart is not for sale but in the begining, you said i bought a love do you think that we should use this descption for heart or love do you think that love or heart are avalaible for buying and sale??
I hope u understand me ...If poet give the message so clear there will be no weight for the poem ,sometimes poet must give it between lines to push people to learn the lesson ,to attract their attention I'm sur you understand me here
Here, I understand you very well!!! keep writting!! |
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MDN481 Soldat
Nombre de messages : 296 Age : 36 Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ... Niveau : Pharmacien Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| Sujet: Re: MY HEART IS NOT FOR SALE 20/03/10, 05:35 pm | |
| - Jane a écrit:
- MDN481 a écrit:
I hope u understand me ...If poet give the message so clear there will be no weight for the poem ,sometimes poet must give it between lines to push people to learn the lesson ,to attract their attention I'm sur you understand me here
Here, I understand you very well!!! keep writting!! so I'm happy ,tnx | |
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