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MDN481
Soldat
 Nombre de messages : 296
Age : 36
Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba
Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ...
Niveau : Pharmacien
Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| Sujet: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART  12/08/09, 08:47 pm | |
| Title : such a legendary heart
So far , miles away ,there in a cold place
you show up ,poor , you lost your face
It seems that the strayder just left the race
So far ,deeper and deeper in an ocean
I can hear ,is it you or just a fiction ???
it's you ,a loser ,you lost the perfection
So far ,so high , I was on a cloud
I looked for you ,but nothin' found
you're a ghost ,you can never sound
Such a legendary heart ,Frozen
Now , you're powerless ,Broken
I still have faith and good intention
mourning will be short ,it's useless
I believe in LOVE ,it is the hapiness
Someone else will leave me breathless
Written by Madonne481 ,on wednesday ,12th august 2009 ,at 20 : 44 | |
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mimi-87
Colonel
 Nombre de messages : 3434
Age : 37
Localisation : Alger al3assima
Emploi/loisirs : oulach, makach w mrahch ykoun
Niveau : R3 microbiologie
Date d'inscription : 10/03/2009
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 12/08/09, 09:08 pm | |
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MDN481
Soldat
Nombre de messages : 296
Age : 36
Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba
Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ...
Niveau : Pharmacien
Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 12/08/09, 09:11 pm | |
| Tnx so much mimi ,so kind from you...wait n see lol !!!! | |
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narcisse
Capitaine
Nombre de messages : 2083
Localisation : bin l'buro wa rgaaad
Emploi/loisirs : plantes médicinales
Niveau : mes cher amis vous me manquez tous
Date d'inscription : 17/08/2008
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 12/08/09, 09:50 pm | |
| - Citation :
- I believe in LOVE ,it is the hapiness
Someone else will leave me breathless c'est magnifique bravo  | |
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oups
Eplucheur de patate
Nombre de messages : 65
Localisation : far far away
Niveau : pharmacienne enfin!
Date d'inscription : 07/04/2009
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 12/08/09, 10:23 pm | |
| if u ask me about love... i want a know about it ...
my answer will be:
it's everything about allah, the pur love ,to our souls
the creater of u and me
the heavens and all univers
the one that made us at home and free
the gardient of this trubelivers... | |
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mystic
Lieutenant
Nombre de messages : 1655
Age : 34
Localisation : in my ideal world
Emploi/loisirs : net/livres/sport/tv
Niveau : lost in translation
Date d'inscription : 30/06/2009
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 12/08/09, 10:50 pm | |
| - MDN481 a écrit:
- Title : such a legendary heart
I still have faith and good intention
Written by Madonne481 ,on wednesday ,12th august 2009 ,at 20 : 44 yes we all need faith even in the darkest moments of our lives so nice | |
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narcisse
Capitaine
Nombre de messages : 2083
Localisation : bin l'buro wa rgaaad
Emploi/loisirs : plantes médicinales
Niveau : mes cher amis vous me manquez tous
Date d'inscription : 17/08/2008
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 12/08/09, 11:28 pm | |
| - oups a écrit:
- if u ask me about love... i want a know about it ...
my answer will be:
it's everything about allah, the pur love ,to our souls
the creater of u and me
the heavens and all univers
the one that made us at home and free
the gardient of this trubelivers... very beautiful verses, | |
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MDN481
Soldat
Nombre de messages : 296
Age : 36
Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba
Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ...
Niveau : Pharmacien
Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 12/08/09, 11:50 pm | |
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Invité
Invité
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 16/08/09, 08:08 pm | |
| So close, even at home can be a cold place
what matter what you show ,no one take what you really are
It seems that you did
so close , even closer than your eyes
I can smell, it is defiantly you , not a fiction
It's you a winner, but all did lost the perfection
So close , so down, I was there
I looked for you , I did found a saw
You're a man, just like everyone else
Such a sadly heart, broken
Now ,you need to get up and face ..
I still have faith on you and people’s intention is fake
Life will be short, do your best
I believe in love, but I do believe and treason
Every body is fool , but not you ..!!! (.....for MDN481 ! sorry I’ve modified your poetry but you good, thank you man ) |
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MDN481
Soldat
Nombre de messages : 296
Age : 36
Localisation : Skikda/fac annaba
Emploi/loisirs : net ,musique ,poésie ...
Niveau : Pharmacien
Date d'inscription : 08/08/2009
| | Sujet: Re: SUCH A LEGENDARY HEART 16/08/09, 09:52 pm | |
| tjrs présent avec tes reformulatioons et création .....un trés bon clin d'oeil ,en plus tu t'exprime bien lol | |
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Dr.Biba
Général Major
Nombre de messages : 5963
Age : 35
Localisation : Home Sweet Home
Emploi/loisirs : hiding sadness and pretending to be happy
Niveau : Docteur en pharmacie
Date d'inscription : 21/04/2008
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very nice , you're really a great poet